Former M3CS owner

[mpizutti]

[zamboni]

I knew it's not fair to compare with your previous car how did the M3 CS compared to M8?

[Maitre_Absolut]

I fail to see why this is relevant other than trying to promote your channel

[mpizutti]

Originally Posted by zamboni

I knew it's not fair to compare with your previous car how did the M3 CS compared to M8?

2 different cars..i loved the CS ..i am going to order the new m3 when they
Offer the Mawd system next fall. But totally different cars the m8 feels
Crazy heavy to the CS..but i love the M8 just for what it is.

[mpizutti]

Originally Posted by Maitre_Absolut

I fail to see why this is relevant other than trying to promote your channel

Wel as i love the BMW brand..i just wanted to share with others about the car
..and yes also to help my channel..but in the long run i just like being able to enjoy the different cars.

[gemini.m3]

Way too many needless cuts in your video. I appreciate people sharing their passion but seems everyone wants to be a YouTuber now. It’s going to take years, practice and good quality content to build an audience- you also need to have a personality for it. Good luck with your endeavor.

[jmg]

Gotta work on that pacing. You cut up the dialog in a very odd way, yet let the it roll while you are just driving up to the line, then went to slow mo during the action and didn't show it to us in real time. Very very odd choices to punish the viewer. Always think of your audience. Why do I care about the roll up to the line? I want to see the drag, yet you took that away with a pointless slow-mo. If you want to show the mirror drop, do a replay in slow-mo, because I didn't see it the first time anyway, I was too busy reading the text to reference where it used to be compared to where it is. The flow of information is very important to the audience:

1) show the drag
2) audience wonders why you did poorly
3) Give them the answer AFTER you show the drag. The ECU cut the power. As a content creator, this is called engagement. It is very satisfying as a viewer to have a question then later have the questioned answered in the video. This is called suspense. No suspense isn't always "scary", it's literally suspending the audience, not giving the answer right away. It keeps them interested. That is not to say you have to make them wait 5 minutes before you tell them what happened, although if it is interesting enough, you CAN do that, but suspend them for a few seconds... waiting until after the action to tell them what happened is still suspense. Don't just blow your load by mucking the action and giving them an answer before there is a question. That is poor story telling.
4) Now you can give the audience a replay and narrate right before the mirror drops. Now we can look for it before it happens and actually see it. Right now, I don't see it because I'm busy reading.

Keep working. Also note: no one cares about you, they care about how they can relate to you. Oh look this guy used to have an M3 CS... you don't even talk about the comparison. I have an M3 CS, you baited us about having it, and the video never addresses it. This is enough to make me want to not watch another video of yours because you promised me something you didn't deliver. The audience is selfish and they want something. It's up to you to give them an experience they want to come back to.